a school dead with utter silence the school searches "who is it were missing" "guys, just keep walking" one crowd one heart one man not among us head search and hearts seek life stops
"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." – Confucius
Wednesday, May 28, 2008
Silence
Here is an unfinished poem. It just feels like it needs more to me, but I wanted to share it with you all anyways.
silence
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i like this poem. it's message is very real. or at least, the message i think you're trying to get across is real. there are too many conformers and few leaders. one crowd, one heart, no individual components.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and commenting Brad. That was definitely a major part of the poem. Of course, you can spin it the other way and make it into a poem of unity. I'm not sure which direction this poem leans.
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