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Sunday, May 18, 2008

look me in the eye

look me in the eye I demand you notice me care for me I'm here don't step above or around me I request you don't miss me I beg of you put me back into darkness look upon me no more be not with me I no longer wish to be loved

4 comments:

  1. this is depressing. good, of course, like all your poetry...but depressing!

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  2. Oh that was a depressing day. Thanks for commenting once again

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  3. this was a really great poem, pat. everyone feels this way at some point. it's a serious issue. great writing.

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  4. Thank you Brad. I know it's a common problem, but sometimes I suppose I can't help feeling alone. Sometimes I can't help desiring solitude.

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